10 December 2010

Haiku 2010/344

noticing the stars
should be enough contentment
but some days it's not

2 comments:

Civic Center said...

And sometimes discontent is so pervasive we need to express it twice.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Thanks; I've deleted the duplication. I have no idea what happened there, except way too much to do and a painfully slow computer