21 August 2009

Haiku 233

Afterwards you lie
(Exhausted, shrunken, spent) in
Memories and slime


Ms. Baker said...

Thanks for cheering me up.

Civic Center said...

I hesitate to ask "afterwards what?" since poetry really shouldn't have to be explained, and I know you hate that anyway, but I certainly hope it's not what I think it is.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Most of these are designed for multiple interpretations. If one seems like the obvious one to you, then go with it.