That's fine and dandyBut some of us want to knowabout your New York jaunt
Damn- I just realized that last line has six syllables. Never do haikuafter having Manhattanswatch five become six
A six-syllable line! You could hardly expect me to respond.
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That's fine and dandy
But some of us want to know
about your New York jaunt
Damn- I just realized that last line has six syllables.
Never do haiku
after having Manhattans
watch five become six
A six-syllable line! You could hardly expect me to respond.
Post a Comment