24 December 2009

Haiku 358

Golden french-fried sun
A sky like underdone steak
Goddam hungry day


Sunrise silhouette
Trees lined up across hilltops:
Borders of black lace


Shushu said...

You are a poet! "Golden mashed potato sun" just isn't the same!

Patrick J. Vaz said...

ha ha! that one was for you