24 December 2009

Haiku 358

Golden french-fried sun
A sky like underdone steak
Goddam hungry day

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Sunrise silhouette
Trees lined up across hilltops:
Borders of black lace

2 comments:

Shushu said...

You are a poet! "Golden mashed potato sun" just isn't the same!

pjwv said...

ha ha! that one was for you