23 March 2009

Haiku 82

Strangers on a train
Sitting, standing, ignoring
Strangers off a train

2 comments:

vicmarcam said...

This one has a Dr. Seuss feel to it, and I do mean that to be a compliment.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

I was thinking more Kafka, but I'm certainly OK with Dr Seuss. I would assume that's a compliment. He's very Gertrude Steiny, and as you know I have a thing for Gertrude.