23 January 2009

Haiku 23

Overheated stale
Air of a winter office
Sealed panes, lashed with rain


Before the curtain
Night after night after night
Lost and longing hours

1 comment:

vicmarcam said...

I like how the second one creates two very different pictures in my mind. Because your first one involved a window, that's where my mind went with the second one. I had to come back to it to realize that you probably meant a different kind of before and a different type of curtain.
I'm sorry that you actually have to leave your desk to even see the seal panes lashed with rain.