01 January 2014

Haiku 2014/1

Moon, did you miss me?
You spend your silver freely
even when I'm gone

4 comments:

Michael Strickland said...

"They're back..." -- Carol Ann in "Poltergeist II."

Good, we all need more structure and poetry in our lives.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

my thoughts exactly

Unknown said...

I'm so glad to see the return of the Haiku. One interesting thing about this one is that the 1/1/2014 moon was a new moon, so we were the ones missing it.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

V: Yes, technically, on the day I posted this haiku it was a new and therefore "invisible" moon. And the thought did cross my mind. But these carefully arranged syllables are untethered to the diurnal round, and express a deeper moon-ness.