23 January 2010

Haiku 2010/23

Storm-shaken citrus
Dropped oranges and lemons
Bright on soaked green lawns

2 comments:

Shushu said...

I've been traveling almost constantly since Christmas weekend, and I haven't been able to keep up with your blog while I've been gone.

This is such a wonderful haiku to return to. It reminds me of my first vision of your backyard.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Like so many things, the backyard does look best under dramatic nighttime lighting.

I've been meaning to call you -- you can tell me about your travels. . .