22 July 2009

Haiku 203

Speeding black Corvette
With loud pop music blaring --
But dude, you're still bald

7 comments:

John Marcher said...

Funny haiku Vaz,
with social commentary
yet loaded with snark!

Patrick J. Vaz said...

And here I like to claim I don't do snark and I never rant. . .

John Marcher said...

Working within form
without mastery produced
my regretful bad

Civic Center said...

You do know that baldness in young men is usually a sign of virility aka too much testosterone, don't you? Or were you simply being ageist? No matter, I've always found baldness attractive in others which makes it easy to be bald oneself.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Mike, It wasn't the baldness per se. . . sometimes the compensation is so obvious it only adds to the need for compensation, if you see what I mean.

Civic Center said...

You people with gorgeous hair are often so deeply insensitive, but I'm used to that.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Please! I have a little stray cowlick in the back that is a source of agony -- so don't talk to me about pain!