14 December 2010

Haiku 2010/348

how vulgar the moon!
shining its flashlight into
dark and restful rooms


Civic Center said...

Oh dear, with my unerringly vulgar mind, I misread the last line as "dark restrooms," and immediately thought of, well, let's not go into it.

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Yes, let's not!

Good Lord, Mikey. You and the moon.

John Marcher said...

Sorry, I'm straight and I thought the same thing. Great couplet with the former though!

Patrick J. Vaz said...

Wow. What is wrong with you guys? Or, perhaps, what is wrong with me?

C'mon guys -- only 17 syllables. Pay attention to each one! RestFUL rooms, not restrooms.