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22 July 2009

Haiku 203

Speeding black Corvette
With loud pop music blaring --
But dude, you're still bald

7 comments:

  1. Funny haiku Vaz,
    with social commentary
    yet loaded with snark!

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  2. And here I like to claim I don't do snark and I never rant. . .

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  3. Working within form
    without mastery produced
    my regretful bad

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  4. You do know that baldness in young men is usually a sign of virility aka too much testosterone, don't you? Or were you simply being ageist? No matter, I've always found baldness attractive in others which makes it easy to be bald oneself.

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  5. Mike, It wasn't the baldness per se. . . sometimes the compensation is so obvious it only adds to the need for compensation, if you see what I mean.

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  6. You people with gorgeous hair are often so deeply insensitive, but I'm used to that.

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  7. Please! I have a little stray cowlick in the back that is a source of agony -- so don't talk to me about pain!

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