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04 October 2009

Haiku 277

Candied orange moon
Turning bright silver in a
Soft blue velvet sky

6 comments:

  1. Ha! I liked this one. It sounded like part of a lullaby or a really good children's book.

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  2. So . . . you're saying you didn't like the others?

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  3. No. I love all the others. I only liked this one.

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  4. It's good to know just where we rank in the finely-graded scale. . .

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